I Scream, You Scream, We All Scream When Our Ice Cream Gets Stolen!
by the 4th graders
It was early in the morning, and the dew was still on the grass. Suddenly a sad cry split the still morning air. Madison, a very ugly midget who was quite fat, was crying because someone had stolen her chocolate chip chocolate ice cream! GP, another hefty midget who lived nearby, and whose hair was just too long, had broken into Madison's house and stole her favorite dessert!
When Madison calmed down, she called her BFF, Addy, who was an expert marksman. Addy found out that GP had taken the ice cream and she arrived at his house, just in time to see him eat the first bite of the frozen confection. She used her training in explosives to quickly set a trap and blew up the rest of the ice cream. Ice cream flew everywhere!
GP was arrested and went to jail. Madison thanked her friend and they both went to the store to buy some more ice cream!
The end.
Who would have thought to blow up ice cream? I guess if Madison can't have it, Addy wanted to make sure that GP couldn't either! Leave some comments.
Friday, November 6, 2009
Thursday, November 5, 2009
Fairview ES, Demorest, GA
Mysterious!
By the 2nd Grade
Why did Joe go to jail? Well, it's an interesting story. Joe was a tall mean boy who was always happy, especially when he was being mean to people. One of his favorite people to be mean to was a young, grumpy, small boy who loved a Pokemon book. This book was so cool because it contained information about all the Pokemon characters.
Joe climbed down the chimney and stole the book. Joey called his dad, Bill and Bill said he would help. Bill called his girlfriend, Sarah, and told her he was going to help Joey get his book back. Bill looked and looked for the book and when he found Joe, he asked for it back. Joe gave it back but he had to go to jail for stealing. Joey was glad to have his book back and thanked his dad for helping him.
The end.
Ah another happy ending. It's good when dads get to help! What do you think?
By the 2nd Grade
Why did Joe go to jail? Well, it's an interesting story. Joe was a tall mean boy who was always happy, especially when he was being mean to people. One of his favorite people to be mean to was a young, grumpy, small boy who loved a Pokemon book. This book was so cool because it contained information about all the Pokemon characters.
Joe climbed down the chimney and stole the book. Joey called his dad, Bill and Bill said he would help. Bill called his girlfriend, Sarah, and told her he was going to help Joey get his book back. Bill looked and looked for the book and when he found Joe, he asked for it back. Joe gave it back but he had to go to jail for stealing. Joey was glad to have his book back and thanked his dad for helping him.
The end.
Ah another happy ending. It's good when dads get to help! What do you think?
Fairview ES, Demorest, GA
A Love Story
By the 3rd grade
Have you ever lost your girlfriend? Alex knows how you feel. Alex Wingman is a 2 foot tall zombie monster who is in love with Hannah, his pretty girlfriend.
Hannah was kidnapped by Justin, an ugly Teletubby, in broad daylight at the park. Alex heard about it and called 911. The detective they sent asked a lot of questions, and followed the clues to Teletubby Land.
When they found Hannah, and got ready to rescue her, she wouldn't go back, because she had fallen in love with Justin! Poor Alex lost his girlfriend twice. Once to a kidnapper and another when she fell in love with another.
The end.
How sad! What do you think? Leave a comment.
By the 3rd grade
Have you ever lost your girlfriend? Alex knows how you feel. Alex Wingman is a 2 foot tall zombie monster who is in love with Hannah, his pretty girlfriend.
Hannah was kidnapped by Justin, an ugly Teletubby, in broad daylight at the park. Alex heard about it and called 911. The detective they sent asked a lot of questions, and followed the clues to Teletubby Land.
When they found Hannah, and got ready to rescue her, she wouldn't go back, because she had fallen in love with Justin! Poor Alex lost his girlfriend twice. Once to a kidnapper and another when she fell in love with another.
The end.
How sad! What do you think? Leave a comment.
Fairview ES, Demorest, GA
Hammer Time!
By the 1st grade at FES
"John Henry's hammer is missing!" No one could believe it, but it was true! Someone had stloen John Henry's hammer. John henry was a big, mean guy and he loved that hammer! He used it at work to drive nails and even used its magic power once to knock down a mountain!
But sure enough, it was gone. It seems that during the night, someone snuck into his house and took it. When he discovered it was missing, he called 911. They sent over a detective who followed the clues and found out that the hammer had been taken by Hello Kitty, a nice, but very large, cat. The detective told John Henry about Hello Kitty and together they went to her house and took it back.
Surprisingly, she and John Henry became good friends after that, and she never took his hammer again!
The end.
Cool story. We'd love to hear from you! Leave a comment!
By the 1st grade at FES
"John Henry's hammer is missing!" No one could believe it, but it was true! Someone had stloen John Henry's hammer. John henry was a big, mean guy and he loved that hammer! He used it at work to drive nails and even used its magic power once to knock down a mountain!
But sure enough, it was gone. It seems that during the night, someone snuck into his house and took it. When he discovered it was missing, he called 911. They sent over a detective who followed the clues and found out that the hammer had been taken by Hello Kitty, a nice, but very large, cat. The detective told John Henry about Hello Kitty and together they went to her house and took it back.
Surprisingly, she and John Henry became good friends after that, and she never took his hammer again!
The end.
Cool story. We'd love to hear from you! Leave a comment!
Fairview ES, Demorest, GA
Spiderman's Mom is COOL!
By the Kindergarten classes at FES
Spiderman took off his mask. He was very tired. He had become so grumpy that he had started becoming a bad guy. He used to fight bad guys and now he was becoming one!
He looked over his treasured collection of stuff and saw his favorite, his big green web. He went to bed, but when he woke up, he saw that someone had flown into his upstairs window and had broken into his house. He raced down to his treasure room, and he could not believe it! Someone had stolen his big green web!
He called his mom and asked her to come over and help him solve the mystery. She was a big woman who loved to cook. She also loved to solve crimes. As soon as she arrived at Spidey's house, she checked the video she had hidden in the upstairs hall and discovered that Green Goblin was the thief!
She hunted him down, chopped his flyer in half with a butter knife and got the web back. Spiderman and Green Goblin became friends after that, and they both decided to become good guys.
The End
I like a happy ending. What about you? Leave a comment and let us know what you think!
By the Kindergarten classes at FES
Spiderman took off his mask. He was very tired. He had become so grumpy that he had started becoming a bad guy. He used to fight bad guys and now he was becoming one!
He looked over his treasured collection of stuff and saw his favorite, his big green web. He went to bed, but when he woke up, he saw that someone had flown into his upstairs window and had broken into his house. He raced down to his treasure room, and he could not believe it! Someone had stolen his big green web!
He called his mom and asked her to come over and help him solve the mystery. She was a big woman who loved to cook. She also loved to solve crimes. As soon as she arrived at Spidey's house, she checked the video she had hidden in the upstairs hall and discovered that Green Goblin was the thief!
She hunted him down, chopped his flyer in half with a butter knife and got the web back. Spiderman and Green Goblin became friends after that, and they both decided to become good guys.
The End
I like a happy ending. What about you? Leave a comment and let us know what you think!
Tuesday, September 8, 2009
Statham Elementary School
Big Bob's Book
By the kids at SES
Bob liked unicorns. Bob was a BIG space alien who looked like a donkey, and he like unicorns. But the thing he loved the most was a book that always read, entitled, Breathe In, Breathe Out.
One day while he was reading it, Jake, a talking zombie with 25 legs, jumped up in Bob's face and stole Bob's book! Jake then ran deeper into the woods to hide.
Bob called his best friend Charlie, who has a long tongue and wears a helmet. Charlie knew just what to do. He got his laser gun, and went to Jake's not-so-secret hideout. He used the laser to scare Jake into giving the book back, and Jake escaped into the woods. He had gotten away!
UNTIL...
His mother heard about what he had done and he got in BIG trouble!
The end.
By the kids at SES
Bob liked unicorns. Bob was a BIG space alien who looked like a donkey, and he like unicorns. But the thing he loved the most was a book that always read, entitled, Breathe In, Breathe Out.
One day while he was reading it, Jake, a talking zombie with 25 legs, jumped up in Bob's face and stole Bob's book! Jake then ran deeper into the woods to hide.
Bob called his best friend Charlie, who has a long tongue and wears a helmet. Charlie knew just what to do. He got his laser gun, and went to Jake's not-so-secret hideout. He used the laser to scare Jake into giving the book back, and Jake escaped into the woods. He had gotten away!
UNTIL...
His mother heard about what he had done and he got in BIG trouble!
The end.
Tuesday, August 4, 2009
Primrose Schools of Mansell and Jones Bridge, Roswell/Alpharetta, GA
Case Solved!
By the Primrose Writers
It was an ordinary day -- or, was it?
It seemed like any other day to Chloe, the funny, brown horse that everybody liked. Chloe loved to read, and she was always talking about her newest favorite book.
This week, she was telling everybody about a new book of princess stories, and the really funny story about a boy who wanted to marry the princess, but he kept getting thrown out of the castle. Not asked to leave, but literally thrown OUT of the castle - the door, the window, the attic, etc.
On this day, while Chloe was away from home, Bob, a weird, evil dude who loves donuts made himself very small, and snuck into her house. While he was there, he decided to steal something. He didn't take food, or money, or her video games. He stole her book!
After he stole the book, he walked down the street in the Florida sunshine, very happy about the bad thing he had done. He was certain he had gotten away with it!
Chloe discovered her book was missing and asked her next door neighbor, Billy Bob Joe, a handsome detective, to come over to help her look for ir. Billy Bob Joe knew that Chloe was allergic to strawberries, so he was very surprised to find a wad of strawberry gum on the floor, near where she kept her book. He realized it was a clue!
He took it to his lab and using a very complicated scanner, determined that the gum had been chewed by the notorious bad guy, Bob. The cops had been looking for a way to arrest Bob, but he had never left any clues behind. This was the break they had been looking for.
They found Bob in his hideout, trying to read the book, and they arrested him. He went to jail for a long time!
The End.
What do you think? These kids wrote quite a good story!
By the Primrose Writers
It was an ordinary day -- or, was it?
It seemed like any other day to Chloe, the funny, brown horse that everybody liked. Chloe loved to read, and she was always talking about her newest favorite book.
This week, she was telling everybody about a new book of princess stories, and the really funny story about a boy who wanted to marry the princess, but he kept getting thrown out of the castle. Not asked to leave, but literally thrown OUT of the castle - the door, the window, the attic, etc.
On this day, while Chloe was away from home, Bob, a weird, evil dude who loves donuts made himself very small, and snuck into her house. While he was there, he decided to steal something. He didn't take food, or money, or her video games. He stole her book!
After he stole the book, he walked down the street in the Florida sunshine, very happy about the bad thing he had done. He was certain he had gotten away with it!
Chloe discovered her book was missing and asked her next door neighbor, Billy Bob Joe, a handsome detective, to come over to help her look for ir. Billy Bob Joe knew that Chloe was allergic to strawberries, so he was very surprised to find a wad of strawberry gum on the floor, near where she kept her book. He realized it was a clue!
He took it to his lab and using a very complicated scanner, determined that the gum had been chewed by the notorious bad guy, Bob. The cops had been looking for a way to arrest Bob, but he had never left any clues behind. This was the break they had been looking for.
They found Bob in his hideout, trying to read the book, and they arrested him. He went to jail for a long time!
The End.
What do you think? These kids wrote quite a good story!
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