Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Taylor ES, Lawrenceville, GA

Jail Bars and Chocolate Bars

By the students in the first assembly program

Johnny was in jail and said, "I'm going to get Clay and his chocolate bar next time!"

Clay's chocolate bar was the reason Johnny was in jail at the moment. Actually, Johnny was in jail because he STOLE the chocolate bar. Ir was not the chocolate bar's fault.

Clay is a funny kid who likes to read and eat. He had a lot of cool things, but the thing he loved the best was a special chocolate bar that was the sweetest, most chocolaty candy bar ever. Clay was saving it for a special occasion.

Johnny is a very friendly guy, except that he is a thief. He loves to steal stuff. When he found out that Clay had that special candy bar, he decided to take it. He waited until Clay fell asleep and he crept into Clay's house. He grabbed the candy and ran away.

When Clay woke up, he saw that his chocolate bar was not in his usual place. After looking for it everywhere, he noticed that a window was open and saw footprints outside. He called his friend Kai to tell her that his favorite candy had been stolen!

Kai is a crazy space alien who likes to walk on rocks. She followed the clues and the trail that Johnny left behind and found him just before he opened and ate the chocolate. She swooped in and stole the candy bar back from Johnny. Clay called 911 and the police arrested Johnny and put him in jail.

The end.

Claudia says, "That was an interesting story. It had action, an alien, a mystery, and CHOCOLATE! That's my kind of story!"

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