Monday, March 1, 2010

Brown Elementary School, Smyrna, GA

A BIG Mystery
By the students at Brown Elementary School
Like most 8 year olds, Sam LOVED his Playstation 3. It was all he could think about! He loved to play games on it, but what made it so special was that it was magical. All he had to do was wish for a game, and he could play it - new releases, popular games, and even games that only Sam had dreamed up. This PS3 was no ordinary game system.
But then of course, Sam was no ordinary 8 year old. You see, he was a giant! Not just a tall kid, but a real, huge giant! He was so large he had to have his PS3 controllers specially made to fit his big hands.
One night while Sam was asleep, an 80 foot tall guy named Moracho (which means dark purple in Spanish) reached into Sam's room through an open window and stole Sam's beloved PS3.
When Sam woke up, and saw an empty spot where his game system had been, he called his friend and neighbor Jack. Not only was Jack nearby, Sam knew about Jack's amazing laser beam stun gun.
They tracked down the 40 year old Moracho and used the stun gun to freeze him temporarily while they got the PS3 back. When Moracho got over the stun, Sam and Jack asked him questions about why he stole the game system. He explained that he had never seen a game large enough for him to play before and he took it.
Sam and Jack told Moracho that he should ask if he'd like to play, and they would let him.
They all became very good friends and played lots of video games together.
The End!
I Like what you did to my story idea. You did a GREAT job!
Claudia

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